A blog about Dave Lebow's art work from life and imagination.
Saturday, December 12, 2009
Eyeball update
I think I improved the composition a lot with the addition of these couple of figures on the right and left and expanding the size horizontally. This is closer to one of my preliminary idea scribbles .
I prefer the grayscale image with the larger eyeball to the color one in terms of composition; it puts the viewer more in the action (esp. the nearby guy on the left) and makes the eyeball seem more of an immediate threat to the lady.
I agree the composition is improved compared to the previous post, it's more dramatic and easier to read.
I think I improved the composition a lot with the addition of these couple of figures on the right and left and expanding the size horizontally. This is closer to one of my preliminary idea scribbles .
2 comments:
I prefer the grayscale image with the larger eyeball to the color one in terms of composition; it puts the viewer more in the action (esp. the nearby guy on the left) and makes the eyeball seem more of an immediate threat to the lady.
I agree the composition is improved compared to the previous post, it's more dramatic and easier to read.
Thanks Jared, I appreciate your feedback.
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